Thank you for this breath of fresh air.
'Tu pensamiento es perfecto, pero helado' - this, is not an insult, it is more, merely a comment.
The story of the black poet is too short. I want to learn more of how black this poet was.
Continuing the review, your second story is excellent and should help bring in more new readers.
I want a hard copy of these works, I think they will be collectible.
The punctuation seems very very tight.
Your stories explore the meaning of language. not explicitly, yet, but they explore it. I'm loving wondered about language.
I am on page 16. I have enjoyed each page.
Wednesday, May 8, 2013
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